高考英语写作“三步曲”论文_叶菊蓉

高考英语写作“三步曲”论文_叶菊蓉

◇ 叶菊蓉

(四川省绵阳市梓潼中学 梓潼 622150)

写好高考英语作文的重要性:语、数、外高考均150,分值比重大,历来被视为主科。 英语作文分值35分,同时是一个主观性较强的题,故此,英语作文往往决定考生是否能得高分。所以,写好英语作文是非常重要的。那么,如何在短时间内写好高考英语作文呢?经实践,“三步曲”作文法可有效提高作文的得分。

现状1人们为了方便到处走动而开自己的车出行,随着私家车的增多,交通堵塞也越来越严重

2经常有道路正在修理中,使得有些路线更加繁忙

3政府没有人为人们提供足够的停车场所;噪音污染使得人们在工作或学习时心情不佳

解决办法1限制车辆的流入,鼓励使用公共交通工具

2拓宽道路,绝不允许在市内大声鸣喇叭

写好高考英语作文的实用方法----写作“三步曲”。高考阅卷老师们指出,高考作文要得高分,需要做到:卷面整洁、书写工整、要点齐全、表达正确、语言流畅、适当使用较高级语法。因此,在短时间内要写全要点、表达正确流畅就需要平常加强写作的训练,形成高效写作习惯。“三步曲”,顾名思义,就是三步写完作文。这三步即搜索词汇、由词造句、连句成篇。试举一篇作文为例说明这三步:

题目要求:写一篇关于城市交通的提纲式作文

假如你是一名高一的学生,请你根据下列表格中的内容给21世纪报写一篇文章,反应你们所生活的城市的城市交通状况,并给出自己的解决方法。

期刊文章分类查询,尽在期刊图书馆词数100-120

现状 1人们为了方便到处走动而开自己的车出行,随着私家车的增多,交通堵塞也越来越严重 2经常有道路正在修理中,使得有些路线更加繁忙 3政府没有人为人们提供足够的停车场所;噪音污染使得人们在工作或学习时心情不佳 解决办法 1限制车辆的流入,鼓励使用公共交通工具 2拓宽道路,绝不允许在市内大声鸣喇叭

第一步 搜索词汇

1方便 convenient

2四处走动 get around

3正在修理 be under repair

4路线 route

5提供 provide, offer, supply

6心情不佳 be in bad mood

7允许 allow/ permit doing/sb. to do

8吹响鸣响blow

9喇叭horn

10交通堵塞traffic jam/congestion

11私家车private cars

12停车场所 parking lot

13公共交通public transport

14拓宽道路widen the roads

15由于because of/due to/owing to

16增多 be on the increase

第二步 由此造句

常用句式联想

1 It is adj for sb to do sth

2 There is/ are sth ,which

3 The reason why…is that

4 With …doing, …is becoming more and more adj

5 One of the solutions to this problem is to

6 祈使句 and 陈述句

套用句式

1 人们为了方便到处走动而开自己的车出行

It’s convenient for people to drive their own private cars to get around.

2 经常有道路正在修理中,使得有些路线更加繁忙

There are often some roads under repair, which leaves the other routes busier/heavier.

The reason why some other routes are heavy is that some roads are often under repair.

3 随着私家车的增多,交通堵塞也越来越严重

With the number of private cars increasing, traffic jams is becoming more and more serious.

4 其中一个解决办法就是限制车辆流入,鼓励使用公共交通

One of the solutions is to limit the number of private cars and encourage people to use/take public transport.

5 拓宽道路,更多的车辆将可以在上面行驶Widen the roads and more cars can run on them.

6 决不允许在市内大声鸣喇叭

Blowing the horn is not allowed/permitted.

Never allow people to blow their horns in the city.

7 政府没有为人们提供足够的停车场所

The government does not provide/supply people with enough parking lots.

第三步:连句成篇,修饰润色 适当加上连接词、句,使行文流畅

1 firstly, secondly, thirdly, Last but not least

2 what’s more,besides, what’s worse

3 in my opinion

4 however, but

5 not only …but also

6 in a word, generally speaking

附:Traffic congestion has long been a problem in our city. The reasons why traffic congestion is becoming more and more serious are as follows:

Firstly, with the development of economy, the number of private cars are on the increase. It’s convenient for people to drive their own cars to get around. Secondly, there are often many roads under repair, which leaves some routes more heavier/serious. Last but not least, the government does not provide/supply people with enough parking lots. Meanwhile, people are in bad mood because of noise pollution.

To solve this problem, some people put forward some solutions, one of which is to limit the number of cars coming into city center and encourage people to use/take public transport. Another one is to widen roads and more vehicles can run on them. What’s more, never allow people blow their horns in city.

In a word, we should do whatever we can to release the traffic jam and be friendly to the environment.

论文作者:叶菊蓉

论文发表刊物:《读写算(新课程论坛)》2013年9期(上)供稿

论文发表时间:2014-3-28

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